Animal Farm Project Evaluation

Classmate: Joel
Type of project: Picture
Effectiveness: He sorta conveyed the elements. He mostly just showed what one of the main points of the book was. I think it was good that he showed in the beginning man was the ruler and in the end the pigs were the rulers. They were almost like humans which he showed by having the pig look human and he put an equal sign.
Classmate: Meghann
Type of project: Picture
Effectiveness: I think she did a good job of showing the elements. I thought her picture was creative and very well drawn out. It was a little hard to read some of the words because of the background. For the most part though, you could see everything.
Classmate: Jake
Type of Project: Picture
Effectiveness: Jake did a good job of showing how innocent snowball was. He also showed the greed of Napoleon with his money bag and clothes. I liked how he added in the angry dog. I feel that people forget about the dogs and how they played a big role in Napoleon taking power.
Classmate:Keenana
Type of project: Comic strip
Effectiveness: I liked how he showed the beginning, middle and end in his project. He showed a little bit of foreshadowing. I like how he put in talking bubbles. I also could tell that he put in a lot of work into his.
Classmate: Nic
Type of project: Picture
Effectiveness: Nic did a really good job. Not only did he have a picture but he had an explanatory paragraph about his. He showed lots of things that had to go back to the way people lived during the Russian revolution. I liked that his pig was just a little different from everyone elses.
Classmate: Britta
Type of project: Poem
Effectiveness: I loved her poem. It was different from what everyone else did. It was also a fun way to see all the elements of the book and if you never read it, you would get a lot out of her poem. You can tell she put a lot of hard work into this. Overall I think she has done the best so far.
Classmate: Enolal
Type of project: Video
Effectiveness: Enolal didn't show anything really about the concept of the book. All she had were the character's. They are important but if you don't know anything about the book then its not helpful or mean much. I wish she would have put a little more time into her project.
Classmate: Aaron
Type of project: Picture
Effectiveness: I enjoyed Aaron's picture. He showed everything he needed to and some pictures were funny. I liked how he showed that it was a continuous circle of events. That is very true about the story. I also like how he added in things that other people didn't have. He made his picture more about other animals then just the pigs.
Classmate: Gaylen
Type of project: Comic strip
Effectiveness: Gaylen showed many important aspects of the novel. I appreciated that he made his words big enough to read. Most people didn't do that, but he was thinking about this when he made it. I also like the pictures he chose.
Classmate: Olivia
Type of project: Picture
Effectiveness: She did a good job of showing foreshadowing and irony. I thought her pig was very cute. I am also wondering if that is suppose to be alcohol they are drinking in those cups or something else? Her paragraph was as well nice because it explained a little more then the picture does.

I still think I did a good job on my project. At first I thought my art skills would kill the picture, but as I look at others I realize how hard it is to draw with paint. I like that my picture is different from a lot of classmates. I didn't just focus on the pigs. Mostly I showed the elements in my clearly even if I didn't have a little paragraph to go along with it.